Score: 5

"The major fault is is the lack of humor."

submission: One Ring to Rule ThemAll3

date: November 30, 2004

I think it's time for you to start working on something original. Two years ago you were inspiring alot of viewers and fellow animators but things change and not all things that seemed funny stay that way. (well I guess they do for some people)
One of the main things that held this back was that the humor just wasn't all that humorous. The jokes about lord of the rings were geared too much towards fanboys and most of the other humor even when it was clever was either cliched or just not interesting. One other thing that ruined the delivery of alot of jokes was sauron he is just annoying. his presentatio was understandable when it was in a quick little joke animation but it grates in long viewing periods.
I was upset that none of the characters were improved graphically from the last film while it's still better looking than 90% of other movies on newgrounds you'd still expect improvement. Also the animation didn't seem natural, too stiff.

Score: 7

"Graphically nice, but lacking overall"

submission: Crazy Horse!

date: November 30, 2004

Is was cute and very nice to look at, but i felt like the jokes weren't executed very well. Something this style could have benefited from more rapid fire jokes and some references to western movies. Plus it could have used more western style, not just in look, but in the way the scenes played out.

Score: 4

"Flawed, entertaining none the less."

submission: asdasdddvvvcxvcxvcvcx

date: November 30, 2004

I think the best thing you could do is have it create random mazes everytime so people would have a reason to pla it more than once. Also a little backround music, mabey something jazzy, would make it interesting also the blue circle should move more smoothly.

Score: 4

"no strategy involved"

submission: Invasion 2

date: November 14, 2004

I found out quickly if you build as many infantry s possible you can't lose

Score: 6

"one thing"

submission: Ultimate Zelda Game Quiz

date: November 7, 2004

I can only ask Did you notice how much link in the bonus cartoon looked and sounded like stormy from sealab 2021?

Score: 9

"One of the best music videos on NG"

submission: Smooth Bad Busters

date: November 6, 2004

That was great music video, the animation fit the music perfectly and their was plaenty of action on the screen at all times. I did feel that the random innapropriate things like didlos did feel out of place and somewhat forced in but I'm glad you didn't put in any Micheal Jackson/Children things to go for a cheap laugh and an easy joke. I really hope your score goes up 3.56 is wayy to low for this.

Score: 6

"Copied from another game"

submission: Bill the Robot

date: November 1, 2004

You stole the idea from "The Lost Mind of Dr. Brain" one of my favorite childhood games and you also haven't enhanced the idea in anyway shame.

Score: 4

"needs work"

submission: The pumpkinator

date: November 1, 2004

Needs alot of work but the most glaring problem was that your character moves foward faster than the screen scrolls so you constantly have to move backwards so you dont end up standing right where the enemies appear.
Same two enemies coming out at the same time.I'd go on but it seems you're aware of the issues, i hope you make an update to it

Score: 8

"Cool game, want to see final"

submission: Thugjacker Half

date: November 1, 2004

First of all I really liked the combo system that rewarded you with money, here are a few thing I think you should be able to buy with the money
-New attacks (which the game really needs)
-extra lives
-items and temporary powerups
-possibly enhance your stats(if you choose to give stats)

I encountered a glitch which made your character moonwalk, it was cool add it to the final game

should definetly include a dodge attack move which keeps your combo alive so you can rack up more $$$$$$

Interactivity, I really wanted use that trash can as a weapon in the first level

Score: 8

"Nicety"

submission: Storybook 1: Synj

date: October 23, 2004

It was nice and simple, clean and fresh, really the kind of stuff we should be seeing more of on newgrounds. I think it would have been really cool if you milked the story book theme more. You could have had turning pages to reveal each picture of course this seemed like more of a quick project though. Oh yeah, gel has a hot body.